Making my Development
Making
I started making this new idea in Photoshop but I realised it was harder to make look professional and as a final piece.
The first mock up:
I don't even know what I was thinking about the colours here. I think this is just really poorly executed. Because of this first mock up, I was really put off the idea but I kept trying.
Second mock up:
I feel the colours are better here as they relate more to Twitter. But the free bird at the top is awkward to look at and the way the patterns of the Twitter birds carry on behind the free bird gives mixed messages as well. I thought lightening the top of the composition would work but its didn't really do too much.
I'll get Toms feedback next time.
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