Tuesday, August 5, 2014

Wk 4.2 Part 2: Feedback

Advice on my concepts

Define/Ideate
I had another one on one with Tom and I got some really good feedback. He felt like the Twitter birds that were hanging by their feet upside down weren't as effective as the ones pinned and upright. This was because it looks like the birds are trying to fly away and be free too but they were stuck whereas the upside down ones looked like they gave up or were dead. 

So Tom and I discussed how we could use the pinning down idea in a more effective way. We came up with this rough plan. 
We decided it would be the right way up Twitter birds pinned down in a hen house type place and one spot would be empty where a single bird has flown away to be free (from social media). The free bird will be different looking to the Twitter birds. We think more realistic and perhaps in a different style. 

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