Developing Further
Making
I developed my work with subtle changes like making sure the colours worked well with each other and I also worked on the flow of the work. I changed the colour of the branches so they suited the design more and I also introduced two falling nails from the free bird that is flying away.
In my other developments I experimented with more negative space and having a more simple approach. I did this by taking away the rows of birds and having one bird left on the one branch. I wanted to communicate the loneliness of being stuck in the social media world while other people are out there being free and actually doing something, achieving something.
My last development I did was the same idea of introducing more negative space but not as drastically as the previous one. I wanted to keep the pattern and rhythm in the design because I felt it was stronger this way.
I didn't do what Tom thought I should try out though. I didn't really know how to approach the idea of having real birds collaged into the Twitter bird logo so I avoided it all together.



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