Wk 5.1 Homework

Developing my Concept Further

Making

I took on what Tom said and made more developments. Some are not good at all but it makes me think of better ways to make my ideas and process more effective and successful. 

First Development after feedback

I added real wooden perches for the Twitter birds and added some light textures into the work. I tried the idea of having a read bird as the free one but I feel it is way too different from the style of the rest of the poster.

Second Development

I tried a the silhouette approach but still with a detailed bird to differentiate from the Twitter birds. I also made the texture more subtle and lightened the top of the work to symbolise freedom more clearly. 

Third Development

I moved the bird over slightly here so the text would flow more evenly with it. You might not be able to tell but the text is in the centre of the page. It has a asymmetrical feel to it because of the placement of the free bird though.

Fourth Development

I thought I would also try out what it could look like without the free bird. I think this would make the target audience have to think more about the meaning of the poster -which I think is a good thing. (I am still worried that my work is a bit too obvious).