Feedback on Developments
Critique
After I showed Tom my developments I got a lot of feedback. We decided my final should only have three lines of Twitter birds too leave a lot of negative space where the free bird is flying.
Tom also pointed out that there are too many different styles going on at the moment. The Twitter birds are very vector styled so the gradient and attempted 3D feel of the nails doesn't work with them. The wooden perches look to real. The wooden perches being copied and placed exactly the same way as the next one doesn't work well, as the unique elements in the wood show even know obviously that this was copied and pasted.
Tom also thought that the idea of using Twitter birds is too obvious. He was thinking I should use photos of real birds instead and Photoshop them blue to symbolize Twitter. But with this idea, I don't really know how I would make the free bird stand out anymore.
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